You're a punk. If the other chapters weren't already up and available, I'd be really offended by the way this chapter ends, hahahahahah! WHAT A CLIFFHANGER. Sheesh!!!! TURKEY MOVE, LADY!!! *Wink* I really like it. I love me some good cliffhanger action for sure!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyway, the flow of this chapter is excellent, as is always the case with your chapters, I think~~ The battle scene has been excellent--the variety in camera angles, perspectives, and all that jazz has been great and has kept it very interesting!!! And Ryo's awesome technique to end the battle was really clever, too~~!!!!! I know I'm repetitive, but as always, this was a very beautiful chapter!!! Great work!!!!!!! Keep it up~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!